Hm. That can't be the whole poem, is it? *goes to look it up* Okaaaaay...
chosen by something invisible and powerful and uncontrollable and beautiful and possibly even unsuitable —
...I guess I'm certainly not one of "those" because I don't know what that means exactly. I feel like this poem could have used three more lines to ground me a bit more in the "where are we?" category. It's an oddly exclusive piece, but *shrug* I guess that's intentional.
Hm.
ReplyDeleteThat can't be the whole poem, is it?
*goes to look it up*
Okaaaaay...
chosen
by something invisible and powerful and uncontrollable
and beautiful and possibly even
unsuitable —
...I guess I'm certainly not one of "those" because I don't know what that means exactly. I feel like this poem could have used three more lines to ground me a bit more in the "where are we?" category. It's an oddly exclusive piece, but *shrug* I guess that's intentional.
I liked the ambiguity, but that's kind of where I am in life.
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