Thursday, December 15, 2016

sun day


as de Mille said that
destiny's silently known~
it must be so

(yes, the last line is missing a syllable, but changing 'so' to 'truthful' just didn't flow for me.)


2 comments:

  1. (It just makes it a senryu instead of a haiku; still works.)

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    1. Look at me, being all artsy & not even knowing it!

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